Out of interest, does everyone get to read all the stories? Like are you going to make a post with them all, cause i'd like to read them all!

I mean i can do. Once me and bri have read them ill post them into a drop box and put the link on the forums for people to read. But this is also down to the people who wrote them who i will personally message to see if they are okay with this.

Bris reviews.

Y SO SERIOUS Story: While reading this story I felt a varying array of emotions. I think Serious had a very good story with only minor issues. Mainly I'd like to see him work on his commas and the use of run on sentences. Obviously getting more of a backstory on both of the characters would be great as well but, seeing as its short stories I think it was well done. I also love the twist at the end because I really wasn't expecting it. Overall 7.5/10

Eaglebby Story: Eagle's story was a roller coaster ride of emotions from start to finish. While the character introductions seemed a bit rushed and at times a tad confusing, the plot itself was solid. For someone not always able to use English in the correct way I think he did an amazing job. The hero and villain had you rooting for love. The heartache pulls you closer into the character. Overall 8/10

Synthic's Story: While the grammar and writing of the story was not bad I am unsure how to feel about the story itself. Bordering on weird Sonic porn I was uncomfortable throughout and rushed to get through the story. I don't really know how to grade this one. Overall 5.5/10 strictly cause grammar

Guggy's Story: I absolutely love this story. I was drawn into the plot and carried by my attachment to Paige. Very few spelling or grammar errors and beautifully written. So much thought was put into the story, not to mention the heart. The words make you care for the characters and want to see what happens to them. To be completely honest I'd read an entire book based upon this short story. Overall 9.5/10 for sure.

Mine.

Eagle - 7.5/10 good read was confusing but also had a few spelling mistakes. Was very emotionally throughout the story.
I could understand most of it but as i previously stated there were some parts where they didn't quite fit or make complete sense but it was still a good read overall.

Guggy - 9/10 i really enjoyed this read and i would totally read more of your stuff if you ever make any! Guggy im really proud if this story and i believe you can generally have a career in writing. please send me more of your stuff if you have any!

YSOS3R10US - 8/10 good read interesting to say the least and i like how you set your story. With including the plan view.
I would also like to have more of a back story like bri also mentioned.

Sythnic - 6/10 personally nor sure weather this was a troll post or what but i had to inculde it as you technically entered. It was certainly not what i expected not even sure i can say it was SFW. maybe try harder next time and not make it borderline porn as im not into reading porn stories .-.


The winner if this competition is Guggy. please contact me on steam to receive your game.

PS sorry this took so long to do. I've been rather busy and sick. Much love to you all!

Kind of a late response honestly but first of all congratz "Guggy" for the victory ;P

And an answer to Dino, Here you have my story atleast. I don't care xD #Typos

https://drive.google.com/open?id=1jJAYI7m3btkMgbb0IZtcurQCjIbzrpzyQQiOGzMn_BM

If anyone wanted to read mine