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| Author: | Twist3d_Nsane [ Sun Nov 05, 2017 10:24 pm ] |
| Post subject: | My rap demo. Please enjoy |
Whats a Goon to a goblin? Bitch imma martian. Leave her pussy throbbin when i give her a portion. Fuck her so good her body shakin like contortions I wish a sucka would I'll leave em dead like abortions. Jump in my porche now you know what i am sportin ridin 23's said my car on air jordans Gone off them trees got my mind straight soarin Hit ya with tha heataz now ya brain is pourin. Kill ya fuckin family the very next mornin. |
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| Author: | Minion [ Sun Nov 05, 2017 10:33 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My rap demo. Please enjoy |
this shit heat |
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| Author: | Synthic [ Sun Nov 05, 2017 10:33 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My rap demo. Please enjoy |
straight fire, b |
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| Author: | SpazzO [ Sun Nov 05, 2017 10:37 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My rap demo. Please enjoy |
Two resident trolls like it... Good, in my book. +rep |
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| Author: | TheronRain [ Sun Nov 05, 2017 10:44 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My rap demo. Please enjoy |
Pretty Snazzy my boi. |
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| Author: | Nemesis [ Mon Nov 06, 2017 3:32 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My rap demo. Please enjoy |
melts my heart |
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| Author: | Lyriati [ Mon Nov 06, 2017 7:14 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My rap demo. Please enjoy |
ruins the point of creativity if its just talking about sex |
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| Author: | Sunny<3 [ Mon Nov 06, 2017 10:20 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My rap demo. Please enjoy |
Lyriati wrote: ruins the point of creativity if its just talking about sex
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| Author: | Mr.GoldGames [ Mon Nov 06, 2017 11:20 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My rap demo. Please enjoy |
Yeah I cannot get behind this. Quote: lyr·ic ˈlirik/Submit adjective 1. (of poetry) expressing the writer's emotions, usually briefly and in stanzas or recognized forms. There is nothing poetic here, just a flagrant explanation of someones sex life. Sorry :/ |
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| Author: | Yiggles Moto [ Mon Nov 06, 2017 9:13 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My rap demo. Please enjoy |
My criticism is more on how random the lyrics are, instead of flowing together. Just threw words out that rhymed instead of telling a story or saying much of anything. |
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